How to Approach Unseen Poetry - Part Two
May 4, 2017
Tackling Unseen Poetry - Part Two
Sometimes understanding an unseen poem and responding to it meaningfully can be a difficult task for GCSE English students, but with every poem and question, there are a number of techniques you can employ to ease your worry and focus your response.
4) Give the examiner what they’re looking for
Every year, examiners feedback to exam boards with what students did well during the exam, and what they could have done better.
“Most answers engaged well and used apt illustration effectively. However, specific reference was often absent in less successful responses.”
- Successful answers must be specific in their responses. In other words, be clear and specific with your explanations with clear reference or quotation to support your point.
- Although candidates found it easy to select an interesting line or phrase, some had difficulty in justifying their choice.” Always, you must explain; give reasons for your choices.
- "In responding to poetry questions, students should consider the poet’s style (‘how’ the poem is written) as well as the interpretation of his/her subject matter (‘what’ is being addressed)”
- "While the majority of answers engaged with the text in a positive way, some merely paraphrased the poem or offered undeveloped responses.”
5) Examine what other people do to succeed
Here’s an excerpt from one of our expert-written sample answers:
In ‘To a Daughter Leaving Home’, how does the poet present the speaker’s feelings about her daughter?
At the beginning of this poem, the poet uses the verb ‘loping’ in the phrase, ‘loping along / beside you’ to show that the speaker was bounding ‘along’ or running with long, bounding strides beside her ‘daughter’ as she cycled for the first time. This description of the speaker’s movement suggests that she was happy and excited for her daughter’s first experience of riding a bike, and proud that she had reached a sort of milestone in her young life.
Soon after, when the speaker recounts how her intended audience, her ‘daughter’, ‘wobbled away / on two round wheels’, we get the image of the daughter’s initial, unsteady movements, ones that must have been a concern for the speaker. Like any caring parent, she would have worried for her daughter’s safety, and been afraid that she might fall and injure herself. Yet, she holds back, and allows her daughter to pursue the activity that is making her happy.
Subsequently, we learn that the speaker is surprised at her daughter’s success, ‘my own mouth rounding / in surprise when you pulled / ahead’. On an initial reading, this seems as if the mother’s expectations have been subverted: she thought her ‘daughter’ was likely to fall, or that she, at least, would need her mother’s help in getting started.
For more insight, check out some of our sample answers. We’re sure you’ll be able to identify these elements and get a better understanding of how to write your own essays